Like Sand Through Your Fingers - Comments

lol goodness xD i just love what comment swap throws out to me xD your writing style is lovely, and the story itself was just fun :D it wasn't like awkwardly dirty like some i've read where i feel like i have to slam the laptop shut if someone walks in the room xD it was just right xD your good :) please keep writing stories :) cause your simply wonderful!

This is my 7th Big Time Rush Fan-fiction today. Comment swap keeps throwing them at me xD
I dont like Big Time Rush and I usually don't read fan fictions for them because I don't like them. I also dont read this KIND of story but It is very detailed and it looks great. keep writing :)

Whew! That was wow... I've never ever read a legit Kendall/Erin paired story, let alone the intensity & intimacy provided in 2,000 words :) I love it. Your sex scenes are always amazing and I'm a bit envious that it seems like you are comfortable writing them and it flows very well.
I love the setting and the characteristics alreay built into Erin & Kendall. Wow, the massage intro was a good idea. I've never really thought or read a massage-turns-into-hot-sex type of story.
But ahahaha, Erin leaving Kendall wanting more :D Best thing ever.
I guess he won't ever complain about her invading his home again.

As per usual, I loved this :) Your titles are always intriguing, and the way you design the summary and layouts so... I dunno how you say it, clean? The layout isn't cluttered with pictures, but still original!
Moving on to the actual story....
Once again, I loved your entry! I have to say, I looked at a few of your other stories and one shots, and you don't write like most people on here do (including me). While you focus on details and description, the dialogue is placed in just the perfect places so it doesn't break the flow of the story. You're a triple threat :D
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed it and I can't wait for your other entry (no rush though!) c: