The Ghost That Saved Me - Comments

I'm not giving up lol

still waiting.....lol

I'm still waiting for an update on this !!! You're not off the hook :)

You already know how my comments go haha. Just update again please :)

YOU UPDATED!!! YOU UPDATED!!! YOU UPDATED!!! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?!?!?!?!?! YOU LIKE DISAPPEARED!!! UNACCEPTABLE!!! YOU OWE ME AT LEAST SIX CHAPTERS IN THE NEXT TWO WEEKS!

The summary is simple and sometimes that could work, but I think there's a bit more information needed in this one. It needs something to spice it up a little and pull the reader in. I also think that the numbers would look better if they were written out in words.

He was so outgoing, so untouchable. The comma needs to be added in there.

You’re a geinous as it is, you don’t even need to study. That should be genius.

The first chapter didn't really get me interested. It's a slow start and there's not much to really get me hooked.

I do like your writing style, though. It flows easily and I like your descriptions.

(Comment Swap) I think the pink back ground is bothering, getting inthe way, just like the centered texzt in the story, or is this to make it look like a poem?
(Chapter1)
an easy read, but it doesn't really call me in.
the vocabulary stay together, but not really out of the ordinary.
I guess the story need to be told, like every other story?

So I read the first chapter and I really liked it. Your descriptions are well done. I love the names you used. I love a story with good names. You're a great writer and I can see this story going far. I wish you the best of luck with it. Keep up the good work and you'll do great!

Comment swap brought me here, but I'm so glad it did. I was really impressed by this story. I was instantly pulled in and couldn't stop reading. I really like the character of Liam. You're a good writer and I was more than excited to come across your story. Good job!

Comment swap brought me here again, so I'll give another quick review.
I just want to point out that in Chapter 7 there was a line that seemed very weird. It was this:
\“Thank you so much, Brady. That means a lot no matter if I know slash remember you or not.” I'm very confused about what you meant.

I really like this story. I really like Liam. I really like that Ray and Mar are civil and they love each other and that they want to be around each other as much as possible. I really like that about this story because I thought fifties sibling relationships were dead, but this story made that bubble of love pop back into my head. Keep it up, this is great so far. (:

OMG HOW COULD YOU KILL MAREK!?!?!?!!?!?! NOOOOOOOOOOO!?!?!?!!?
*dramatic drawn out screaming*
I LOVED HIM!!!!!!!
On another note this story is really good and I'm excited to read more. I REALLY wanna know more about Liam and how he died and why he's helping Rayne out so much. To say I am interested is an understatement! I'm excited to keep reading and can't wait for the next update but SERIOUSLY WHY YOU KILL MAREK!?!?!?!?

I think this story is written really well and has a very strong plot. I really like all of the characters, especially Liam. He's my favorite.
I also think you did a very good job Writing Marek's death. You conveyed the emotion very well and it really fit with the story!

Not going to lie but that chapter was hard for me to read beacause my a couple years ago one of my big brothers was in a head on car rash with some of his friends and none of them had seatbelts on and the driver turned the weel at the last moment and saved all of them the cops said if he didnt turn the weel they all would have died the car allso flipped but my brother dosnt rember that they had to use the jaws of life to get them out of the car my mom thinks he doesnt remember it because he passed out. i remember when we got the call i could tell in my moms voice that something was wrong and i felt like something was wrong and i brook down crying when my mom was still on the phone seeing what hospital he was going to.luckly my brother only hade to get stiches above his eye and brook some teath which are now fixed his
friend one had to get her spleen removed the other she had to get a skin graph on her foot and kinda messed up her back and the drievr i think he broke a rib
the only bad thing that happend to him is now he has post traumatic stress disorder and can't drive because he gets flashbacks. they are all doing good now though well besides my brother not driving

PS. WHY DID YOU KILL MAREK :'(...... UPDATE SOON:) ( sorry for any spelling mistakes )

Okay, so you deserved to be shot in the foot for that one -.-

WHY THE HELL DID YOU KILL MAREK?!?!?! UGHHHHHH!!! HE BETTER COME BACK AS FUCKING GHOST OR SOMETHING!!!

WE WANT MAREK! WE WANT MAREK!!

Okay, im done being a bitch. Still pissed though. Keep up the good work :)

I got a chapter dedicated to me?? *gasp* *sniff sniff* i feel so special :')

I GOT MY LIAM!!! Lol but i want more! Haha

Update soon please :)

Update please :)

I need to know what's happened to Marek! He better not be dead!
Aw Liam, they definitely to hang out more :)

Where is my Liam????? I need my Liam!!!

Lol update soon pleaaseeeeeeeee!!!

If Marek is dead, I'm going to shoot you in the foot......well, not really.

Update please!