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  • hellobeautiful

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    I thought there was more to the story,
    Until I read again and saw the "completed' haha.
    Ahhh shucks!
    Great writing though!
    I really thought it was cliff-hanger,
    And that she really wasn't dead.
    :(
    January 7th, 2012 at 06:12am
  • hellobeautiful

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    WOW.
    This is really interested.
    Can't wait to see where you go with it.
    Keep writing!
    Looking forward to your next update.
    :D
    January 7th, 2012 at 06:04am
  • IDontKnowWhoYouAre

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    This was a really good story, it had me hooked from the start. Nice job, keep it up!
    December 29th, 2011 at 03:18pm
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