Crushed Innocence - Comments

I thought there was more to the story,
Until I read again and saw the "completed' haha.
Ahhh shucks!
Great writing though!
I really thought it was cliff-hanger,
And that she really wasn't dead.
:(

WOW.
This is really interested.
Can't wait to see where you go with it.
Keep writing!
Looking forward to your next update.
:D

This was a really good story, it had me hooked from the start. Nice job, keep it up!