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I love student/teacher relationship stories! They're almost always awesome! This is one is definitely awesome so far! I love the way you've made Ryder into this fake character that really just wants to break out. And I really like that Alex is pushing her to do that. She needs someone like Alex to help her. I do NOT like Jensen at all. He seems stupid and materialistic and conceited. Ryder shouldn't be with him. I hope she dumps him for Alex. Soon! :) haha. Thanks for the update!!!!! :DAugust 2nd, 2012 at 08:10am
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Yayyy! More soon. :)March 27th, 2012 at 04:58am
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I like this. It's different. More soon!March 25th, 2012 at 05:32pm
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<3 Just started reading. Marvelous. :) Cannot wait to see what happens in future chapters!December 31st, 2011 at 12:52pm
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Okay, definitely didn't expect him to be her teacher. lol. Can't wait for the next update! :)December 30th, 2011 at 02:26am
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i like it, more soon?(:December 30th, 2011 at 02:14am
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It's off to a good start. Can't wait to read more! :)December 26th, 2011 at 03:31pm
I'm not sure if it ever can be continued since it was a co-write, but if either of you ever find the inspiration to pick it up again, I will be here to read. I like that Alex sees the side of her that no one knows. The character was definitely on the way of learning from that, with knowing which way she should truly be.
This was really great, what you have of it. Just wanted to leave a comment letting you know you would have a reader if it was continued. :)
Also, something random to note: the main character is named Ryder, correct? I assume so since that's her name in 99% of it, but in chapter 7, you put "Dakota's POV" and yet it still seemed like Ryder's? I'm thinking there was just a name change, and that chapter didn't see the correction, lol. Just a small thing that confused me.