Love Has No Gender - Comments

Dear author, the summary was rather interesting. At parts you forgot to use space between sentences. Your descriptions were detailed nicely and I quite enjoyed reading this one-shot. ~Marian.

Dear author, the summary was rather interesting. At parts you forgot to use space between sentences. Your descriptions were detailed nicely and I quite enjoyed reading this one-shot. ~Marian.

I thought this was a nice little smut piece, though I can’t say I’m a fan of PWP myself. As far as concrit goes, I only have two suggestions. First off, it might be better if you varied your sentence structure a little. Some parts just flow a little too choppily. Also, I would’ve enjoyed the piece more if you involved more emotion because, while I get that some people enjoy reading just sex, it didn’t really do much for me because I didn’t feel anything for the characters.

Hey I loved it. More chapters like this.

Absolutely loved this. The title caught my attention and I could picture everything that went on. This is amazing. Well done.