You have great flow -- this read really really well (which is saying something)
He reckons he wasn’t that drunk, but several accounts of his lips on other people throughout the night said otherwise. I love this Such a clever metaphor.
“You found a home in all your scars and ammunition, Gerard,” I croaked. “I didn’t.” TEARS. Actual TEARS. I like how you incorporated the song here. It worked beautifully. And the "I didn't". Oh god
I'm so happy you concluded on a happy note. I would've been totally bummed if Frank just left
This was really one of the best Killjoy fics I've read.
Thanks for the recommendation...I loved it. I'm usually not the biggest fan of the Killjoy-verse fics, but I've read a couple of really awesome ones, including this one, and I think I might be converted. But only if they're all as good as this one!
He reckons he wasn’t that drunk, but several accounts of his lips on other people throughout the night said otherwise. I love this Such a clever metaphor.
“You found a home in all your scars and ammunition, Gerard,” I croaked. “I didn’t.” TEARS. Actual TEARS. I like how you incorporated the song here. It worked beautifully. And the "I didn't". Oh god
I'm so happy you concluded on a happy note. I would've been totally bummed if Frank just left
This was really one of the best Killjoy fics I've read.