Total Nightmare - Comments

Ayyyyeee!!! Was that a fanfic? I think it was, but I suck at knowing these things. but if it was! I didn't die! hahaha, it was quite a good story, actually. made me cringe, and reminded me greatly of the Saw movies at one stage. It was sad and horrible and thought-provoking and everything!!

Also, i was wondering, were the hostages (what i'm calling them) naked in the shower? you didn't mention, but i just thought they would be.

all in all, i liiiiiiiiked it!! :)

comment! haha, just kidding! i'm gonna read it now. and sorry for not chosing one of your more recent ones, that you'd care about comments on :( but i can't find myself reading fanfics. stereotyping, i'm sure.

anyway! off to reading, cause it sounds damn interesting!

I really liked it because it was gruesome and also so adorable at the end with Erin and Jimmy. I thought she would have ended up with Johnny but Jimmy is too cute. I did not expect Johnny or Jimmy to save them all I thought something was going to happen after Jimmy killed Vengeance, Shadows and Gates. I do agree with the comments above that the torture scene is very well written but the last part was abrupt you should have at least extended it and added more details but I still very much enjoyed reading it.

I loved it and subscribed even though it's a one shot lol

The torture scene was very well done, although the finale was a bit abrupt and hard to follow. Good job, though!

This story scared me to be honest, I was biting my nails when the Rev showed up... and then he saved the day! I actually cheered and probably woke my dad up (oops). I liked the happy ending, I like how you spared her. I expected her to get with Johnny, but there was a happy dance involved when I saw she married the Rev :3 well done!