Save Your Heart - Comments

Aww, Riley's a sweetie c:

You had me by the summary. The plot makes you go OHMYGOSH WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT?! And I almost said that. You gave great details, and I found myself sympathizing for Meg. I hope Riley see's her as more than a friend soon, because I can tell she really likes him, and to be honest, he seems really attractive. So, I can't wait for another update! (:

I like the plot, it's really great. Like, so good. Really original as well! But there were a lot of grammar mistakes.

so I assumed I have been buried alive. It should be so I assume I have been buried alive or so I assumed I had been buried alive. Assumed is past tense and doesn't really fit in that sentence unless you change the have to had.

There were a couple things like this but otherwise it's a great read! Well done!