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  • mysunshiner

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    [Comment swap] I really like it how you are writing a story based on a song. I think that that's really creative. I do also notice that your last comment was 7 months ago, and I don't see any more chapters! Never give up on stories! Come back and write some more!
    July 23rd, 2013 at 03:40pm
  • WordsWhisperedSlowly

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    Love it! the idea is awesome!
    November 30th, 2012 at 01:13am
  • Swampy

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    Sorry to comment again but my comment didnt come out in full so the rest of it said:
    I really like the idea of a cinderella type story and the way that the charaters first interaction was through music and how it gave you the knowloge that everyone else is like a typical upper class person and doesn't know a lot about proper music :D
    November 29th, 2012 at 08:27pm
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    I like the story and i did spot a couple of small spelling mistakes but that can be solved with proof reading apart from that a great start to the story
    November 29th, 2012 at 08:12pm
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