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  • perfectlyxpoisonous

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    So basically, I just finished this, a little late I know, but I started reading it after I think chapter nine was written, so I was a bit behind...This was completely and utterly amazing! I absolutely loved it and I can't wait for more! :] I kind of don't like Option 1 because I think, although it would be interesting,it would get boring because we already know what happened, and the little twist at the end would already be known...I'm totally stuck between Option 2 and 3 though...I would, if I were you, think about the plot and how hard it would be to write the story in each of their views...Great job! Cookies, ice cream, and cuppycakes to you! :]
    March 28th, 2008 at 03:07pm
  • Signs.

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    Teehee
    CONGRATUALTIONS ON COMPLETING YOUR WORK OF AWESOMNESS [Is that a word? Well, it is now, anyway] I apppllaude you
    *applaudes*
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    GEE-GEE! *cackles*
    XOXO Hannah
    March 28th, 2008 at 10:42am
  • KronicKitty

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    OMG I need more!!!!!!
    March 28th, 2008 at 08:08am
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!
    I loved it!!
    I really did, this is so unique!!
    Well done!

    I think that you should do option two though. Because it does give Gerard that mysterious side still, I like that. So I think that you should keep that in the there by keeping it in Ali's point of view.

    But that's just me.
    =]
    March 28th, 2008 at 03:28am
  • Crash Thrusts.

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    Awesome! I like all of the options, so whatever you do, I'm all for it!!
    March 28th, 2008 at 02:41am
  • Dreaming.:.:.Still

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    I am liking option 2 but whatever you decide to do I am with you all the way!!!
    March 28th, 2008 at 01:22am
  • BeastxInxRepose

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    It seems a bit weird to come in here and say "New reader" when the story is over, but oh well. I liked it.
    March 28th, 2008 at 12:48am
  • Dreaming.:.:.Still

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    THERE HAS TO BE A SEQUEL!! ITS TOO GOOD TO GIVE UP NOW!!!!
    March 28th, 2008 at 12:01am
  • KronicKitty

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    I need more I love this story!!!!!
    March 27th, 2008 at 04:07am
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    wow
    that was an amazing amazing chapter!!
    wow
    that's all I can really say
    ^_^
    March 26th, 2008 at 02:16am
  • Crash Thrusts.

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    That was the best song in the world, the Ghost of You. I love it. And I love this chapter.
    March 26th, 2008 at 12:09am
  • Darkest Spells

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    AWWWWWWWWW
    loved it. update the eloigue soon I WANNA FRIG FRANK lmao jk jk
    March 25th, 2008 at 11:52pm
  • Dreaming.:.:.Still

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    When you gonna update?
    March 25th, 2008 at 02:17am
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    NEW READER

    wow, this story is AMAZING!!
    I love it, and be looking for a new subscriber!!

    (me!)

    *subscribes*
    March 24th, 2008 at 07:35pm
  • Signs.

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    NOOO! She can't be dead!
    -cries-
    3 stars wooo *applaudes*
    updateth sooneth
    XOXO Hannah
    Man in avatar = the Doctor -guilty grin-
    March 24th, 2008 at 10:35am
  • KronicKitty

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    I loved chapter 18 but babe I need more!!
    March 24th, 2008 at 05:04am
  • Crash Thrusts.

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    That's an awesome update!!!
    March 24th, 2008 at 03:58am
  • Dreaming.:.:.Still

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    awesome story!
    *subscribes*
    March 24th, 2008 at 02:03am
  • Mezmerize!

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    I love this story!!!!
    Update soon!!
    =)
    March 24th, 2008 at 01:30am
  • Darkest Spells

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    loved the update!!!
    update soon ali! and happy easter luva lmao
    March 24th, 2008 at 12:51am
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