I See Sparks Fly Whenever You Smile - Comments

HOLY SHIT THIS IS PERFECTION

Damn that dude is a douchebag! Well douche doesn;t even begin to describe it! But I won;t go on a rant to save time!

But damn!!!!

I think a good song could be Here in your Arms by Hellogoodbye.

Update soon please!

For Brooke and Alex's song, pleeease don't use an All Time Low song. That's so overrated hahaha
My suggestions are:
I Wouldn't Mine - He Is We
Good To You - Marianas Trench
Beside You - Marianas Trench (this one works really well with everything going on with Brook.)
Going Away To College - Blink 182
If It Means A lot To You - A Day To Remember (this one works well with Alex leaving and stuff)
Only Place I Call Home - Every Avenue
Amazing - Hedley
Ever After - Marianas Trench (I think this describes Brooke's life :) )
Giving Up - Ten Second Epic
Lost In You - Three Days Grace
No One Does It Better - You Me At Six

Hope these help! :)

suggestion for 'their' song. 'Burn the Night Away' by There for Tomorrow
Also, that chapter was amazing. <3

So, I read this chapter, and cried like a baby. Alex is so sweet and caring <3 I'm glad Brook opened up. I feel like I know the characters in person.. hahah. after this chapter I read how you needed a song for them, and the first one that popped into my head was "Halo" by Beyonce. Because of the first verse pretty much... "remember those walls i built," and it clicked when brook said "you bull dozed through the walls i put up" anyways, excellent chapter <3

Have you ever been so in love with a story that you feel like you wanna know everything about the characters and you cannot wait to read more? Well thats how I feel about this story.

The chapter started off sooo cute, and Alex was beyond the precious, loving boyfriend. I actually laughed out loud with the line "We're talking Draco Malfoy and Voldemort awkward." Too damn funny. While I love the cuteness, I'm glad we are going to get some drama. I'm fully prepared to hate Josh, and I can't wait for more!

awwwwwwwwh <3<3<3<3

ahhh i finally got up to date with this story!!! Keep updating it's amazing!!!

Jack is douche! Haha but I loved the best friend proposal XD

Why is Brook so against marriage?

Update soon please!

I thought this chapter showed a very nice transition in their relationship, with personal connections and the physical. You wrote the last scene well, and I think that Brook did need a bit of liquid courage to take that next step. You also have me very intrigued as to why Brook says she will never get married. Can't wait for more!

At first I was about to slap my computer because Jack didn't like her, and I could've sworn that her story about when she was little and Home Alone would have gotten Jack instantly, and then I melted on the inside when he proposed to her. Then I had other things melt towards the end of the chapter c; lololol jk :P but I just noticed something I should have noticed earlier, but Brook Lynn. she's from new york. i feel really stupid that im just now making that connection, if you did it on purpose or not? hahah, anyways, always love your updates <3 how about alex and brook go to Vegas and get married already? Yeah? kthanks :D

The camping line was pure gold. I'm dying right now hahahahaha

On a seperate note, I was about to beat Jack up until he said he was joking. I'm so glad they all like her(:

Brook getting drunk was hilarious, as we're her parents and their stories. Cute chapter and I'm very intrigued about why Alex needs to be more concerned about her brother.

So, I just wanted to comment and tell you that I just spent the whole day, from 7 am when I woke up, until now, 9 pm, reading this story. Every chapter made me smile. and the really cute, romantic chapters made me giggle like a school girl. c: This is, literally, the best written Alex Gaskarth fanfiction I've read on this site, and because I'm practically in love with All Time Low, that's alot of stories. You have a great talent and if any of your writings were to be published, I would be first in line to buy them. c: Back to the story, I cannot express to you how amazing it is so far. i almost cried when I got to the latest update and there was nothing more to read, but you can definitely expect a comment from me on more of your stories <3

Brook's parents are adorable. Nuff said.

Yay! the parents like him!!

and just when Alex thought he was safe she dropped the brother bomb on him...

update soon please!

Her parents were the best thing about this chapter! I absolutely cannot wait for the dinner, should make for some hilarious reading!

hehehe her parents are awesome!

Can't wait to see how the dinner goes....

update soon please

I'm really liking this.