Acacia Nathalia Sparks - Comments

I really like this story :D very good ;)

Lol... You should reply to my profile and comment there... Anyways, thanks the sharing the story with us.. And i like the new update! I enjoyed our writing style as well.. I think it's beautiful... I like how the character would have appreciation for little beauty like the sky, the moon and Acacia's eyes but still lack of any dramatic emotions.. Maybe it is amazing only to me as i am a very emotionally driven girl... I would like it if you continue the story... All the best in the story construction! Keep up the great work...

@ashlynlol (I dont know if i should reply here. it's my first time so.. yeah )

Awwww, thank you for the feed back. uhm. okay. I'll note it down :')) Honestly, I never thought of what will happen next, so that's why it lacked planning and stuff; the story was just an idea that gotten into me and I had to write it down cause I like it too much to just forget it. anyway, your comment inspired me and thank you for the constructive criticism :')) I think I'll probably rewrite the chap 2 though; my writing style changed a bit xD anyway, thank you and I hope you enjoy reading this and have a nice day! :")

I really like this story... Reminds me if the award winning story of 'Finding Alaska'. Caleb is mature and rational, a typical guy.. And acacia is this really bubbly, fun and explosive character... Very good job, indeed... Btw, some constructive critism is that maybe for like the second chapter, you can start the chapter by saying how you met her? Cause Cia seems to popped out of nowhere.. Like talk a bit bout how caleb has begin his morning before meeting Cia and explain a bit bout his interaction with his mom..? It'll be nice to know some details like the house he lives in, how caleb's mom looks like, and where is this watermelon eating competition located. A bit more details and i think it would be a very nice story... I really enjoyed Cia's random-ness and confidence... Interesting character you have.... Good job!