This is an impressively written drabble. Honestly, it's one of my most favorites. I just love how you set the uncomfortable mood, and actually it was humorous, too. ^^
April 12th, 2013 at 04:56pm
I like the description and mood that you created. however, I picked up some grammar issues and I did not like how the words were italicized and then it said who said what in the next paragraph. to me that greatly interrupted the flow of the entire piece. I like the concept of this too and where you went with the picture.
great job and thanks for entering my contest! c:
