You mentioned in the A/N from chapter 11 that your hedgehogs are apparently gay together, just so you know, they probably are. Homosexuality is quite common in hedgehogs :3
Wow, I am loving this story!!! It is absolutely amazing! It's original too which is awesome. The plot is great and I can't wait to read more so please update when you can!
I think the spaces make it easier to read so... yeah :).
I feel bad for Frank, Gerard and Mikey :(. I really hope Frank's okay and that Jake leaves Frank and Gerard alone.
Hopefully you find one soon then, coz this is a really good story :)