Cold As You. - Comments

"Pat and Kara sittin in a tree...doin' whatever people do in trees..." = My favorite line. Haha
I love how protective and defensive Kennedy is about her. It's so cute! And all the guys' personalities make me laugh.
I like how when they were having that little sing along, one by one, the rest of the guys walked in. Haha.
Im loving how this is going! Update soon! :)

Two favorite lines:
1. "Is this a fuckin' episode of glee?"
2. "Well although it was crush my dreams of sleeping with Garrett..."

I actually laughed out loud when I read those.
Kennedy's acting so cute and protective :)
And I really like how John and Jared just kind of pop up at random moments and just make little comments.

Woah! Pat is piiiiiiisssed! He's like the hulk when he's angry haha
I love how Kennedy is trying to make his move with her now, in a non-sleaze way :3 Even though now he's kid of scared and apprehensive.
Yay! I get John! :D My day is made. Thanks for giving him to me :P
I can't wait to see what happens! Update soon!

Awe, Pat's being overprotective is cute. (Kind of, when he's not a complete asshole.)

Update soon. :)

I love this story sooooo much! :D
you're such an amazing writer!
seriously, I wish I could write, half as well as you do! I can't wait to see what you think of next!
Update soooooon! pretty please? :D
Because that would be pretty awesome if you did(:

I love it. I've recently been looking for a good Brock story and then I stumbled across this gem. It's safe to say that I'm definitely subscribing!
I love Pat. I love Kennedy. I'm not sold on the facial hair though....
But I especially love Garrett. Their friendship is just too adorable. I just want to ruffle his hair or pinch his cheeks or just give him the biggest hug ever. What I would do for a boy like that...
I really like this story and can't wait to see where it's going!
Although it seems to me that Kennedy might be leading her on just a wee bit.
Pat's outburst is by far, my favorite part of the story hahaha also when Kennedy held her hand in the van. So adorable.
Please please please update soon!!

Assfghjkkllkd this chapter was my favorite so far! Even if Pat did go all ape shit on her, the ending with Kennedy being all cute and them expressing themselves and being honest was just too perfect. I loved it. I want more lovey-dovey moments like that!
I can't believe how pissed Pat is. Well I sort of can since he's just trying to look out for her but screaming at her isn't going to help anything.
I love how encouraging John is. He's always there for her. It's too cute. Can I have him? c: I'm going to like buy him off eBay or something. XD
Update soon! :)

The look on my face when they kissed.. Priceless. And Pat's outburst made me all, :o.

I need more. Hah.

The cuteness between them is just... asdfghjkl
but he's still a butt head. k.

Updaaaaate. :):):)

Kenny's mustache<3 oh my god lol he's too cute!
I love their relationship. She's in love with him and he's completely oblivious. It's cute and sad in a star-crossed lovers sort of way!
When he grabbed her hand I nearly died because I could only imagine how that made her feel. Freaking Kennedy needs to open his eyes!
Update soon! :)

Nonono.. she's not supposed to fall for him!

But I'd still think it'd be kind of cute. :')

Aaaaaaahhhhh<3

I like this so far. Continue to update, please. :)