We'll Keep a Secret (If You Keep Me Guessing) - Comments

So I just read what all you have of this, and I really like it so far. I think you're a really great writer. :)
I'm a little lost though on what the point of it seems to be, or the main general plot line I guess. Perhaps you planned on getting into that.
Does the main character fall for one of the members? Is there a focus on Alex's next relationship (by the way you heavily described their Spanish teacher, I was thinking it was going to be something involved with her, since you put the detail there)? Or is it just him getting over his past relationship, and finding out why it fell apart? But if it's about Alex, there's curiosity then with the POV choice. Although I do enjoy this being in Sophia's POV, as I really enjoy reading ATL fics in the original character POV.
But yeah, I'm just wondering what the main concept was supposed to be. I'm hoping it was maybe just getting her with Alex, since he seems to be more of a focus and I think they would be cute together. But the feelings seem to be confusing on that with both ends; with Alex, because we're not getting a full glimpse into what he's been thinking about yet, and with the main character, because while certain tidbits have hinted toward her stronger feelings toward him, they haven't really gone into concrete detail.
I'm definitely over-analyzing, apologies there. But I really have enjoyed what you've written of this story so far. I think the art class thing is a unique concept you have going in this one; you don't really see that as a focus in ATL fan fics. It's awesome how Sophie and Alex are into it. :)
I wanted to leave this comment to let you know I will be here if you ever choose to continue this story. I think it deserves to be continued, especially considering I feel the genuine main idea for it hasn't been quite developed yet. Or maybe it has, it just needs to continue to show us more detail and make it completely clear. Which, again, you probably planned on doing.
It's been a few years, but I have hope you could pick it up again. Once again, I will be here to read. I really hope this comment maybe inspires you to write again. :)

Me Likey(:

That was super short :/ aha
Well I think I know what Alex is doing,
but I might be completely off.
Oh well, I guess I'll find out.
I hope Jack doesn't like her like that :o

Okay update broski. :P

I know what he's thinking about! fvihuhga
Aw Erin and Rian. That's cute that they're finally together!
I feel like JAck is like a big brother to Sophie.
I'm glad she's not all high about herself,
and that she doesn't know what Alex is thinking.
If she did I feel like that'd ruin it. gviarogauri

Updateeeeeeeeeeeeeee fo real. haha

It was too short I'm gonna cry. lmao
I have a feeling I know what he's gonna draw. AHHHH
Please update soooooooon???

Aw that was like really cute. I think Alex likes her. I'm not sure if she likes him though hmm.

I feel like some weird love triangle's gonna happen between Alex, Jack, and Sophia. I don't know, maybe not.

The whole hair thing was cute. aha.

Update soon? Please and thank you!

I like this story! I think it's cool that the girls are 2 years younger than the guys. At first I thought it was silly because what seniors would want to hang out with sophomores ya know? But then I realized that I have so many friends that are seniors, and I'm only a freshman! aha

Update Update Update? :)

This is a great start! Please keep it going ^.^