The Best One Night Stand Ever - Comments

The layout is cute, I adored the color but the writing was a bit difficult to read. It was dark and hard to read against the dark background.

The first chapter was well written. I would go back and space out the paragraphs so that they don't look cluttered. The second chapter was brilliant. One of the best sex scenes I've read in a while. Job well done

First off the color of the layout was a little hard to read.

This was really good. I like the summary, it was short but enough to make me want to read more. The tittle did catch my eye also. Make sure you capitalize your tittle though.

I didn't see any errors, either I over read or you just didn't have any. Which I don't think you do.

Your details are very good. I could never write a sex sence but you did really good with that. I think its hard to write one but your details made it very good. Your writing style is very good.

I really like this :)

I love this! Thanks xD