December 31st, 2011 at 12:57am
Yay! First comment!
Ok, so there isn't much to go on since this is only a summery, but one, I LOVE the idea for the plot and two, you have a beautiful layout, oh, oh! And three, really nice layout. I feel like its going to fit the story super well:)
I saw no grammatical or spelling errors, good job:) and I really like all the original names you have come up with for your characters. It's really cool:)
This will be an interesting read, can't wait to see what comes next:)
Can't wait to read it! (: