December 31st, 2011 at 09:00am
I Still Hear the Rain - Comments
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Ayyee Wallay. You know i luffeh your writing,, but you have like alot of issues that you introduced at one time, you know? Texteh me later Stooge(;December 30th, 2011 at 11:29pm
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awe, that's so sad. she's been through so much and with Alex and Jack putting more shit on her it just makes it worse ):
Who's Nathan (the little boy, i believe)?
and YAY! Jack got karma! WOOO!
Keep writing, i love it<3December 30th, 2011 at 11:28pm -
LOVE LOVE LOVE it brittany i love mrs.GDecember 30th, 2011 at 05:17pm
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Thoughts on 1st chapter:
Love how it starts out.
Rian= absolute sweetheart<3
Alex & Jack=assholes.
Thoughts on 2nd chapter:
Rian is a baby. haha love that he's not like Alex & Jack.
Jack needs to get hit in the nuts for helping.
Alex needs to get kicked in the face pronto.
Mama G did good in lecturing him.
Can't wait for more wifey!<3December 30th, 2011 at 12:56pm -
lol, thank you (:
and i'll be sure to go to sleep xD
oh, and this update was really good! I loved it, but Alex and Jack are douches for doing that to her ):
will you be switching from Alex to Brittany throughout the story?
great chapter, can't wait for the next update :DDecember 30th, 2011 at 11:24am -
i love it and can't wait to read more soon!
the only suggestion i want to say is the font color of black on the dark grey is very hard to read and i have to highlight it just read it
but other then that it's great!!December 30th, 2011 at 11:21am -
I love it already!!
Subscribed! :DDecember 30th, 2011 at 09:55am -
i like how it's started (: I can't wait for the next update!December 30th, 2011 at 09:55am
update soon, please (: