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  • Ofmiceandmen123

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    I love it <3
    August 15th, 2013 at 05:35pm
  • LaerkeTimeLow

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    Yay update! Love the story, keep writing!
    September 11th, 2012 at 02:10pm
  • S.dunning1510

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    Loving it :) Update soon!
    August 7th, 2012 at 07:20am
  • killerlithium

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    i love the update
    July 7th, 2012 at 06:11am
  • pixiesticks650

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    I'm not 100% certain who she is yet, but I don't think that's a bad thing. You've really given us just enough to start to get a feel for who she is, while still leaving us with questions we want answered to hook us in. I also really like how you've started to incorporate the boys. :)
    June 3rd, 2012 at 10:13am
  • killerlithium

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    i love your story will you update soon?
    June 2nd, 2012 at 02:23pm
  • Pineapplez

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    Very good character development so far. Good job showing instead of telling. Still looking forward to seeing where this goes.
    May 28th, 2012 at 05:44pm
  • Pineapplez

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    Amazing! Good, descriptive writing, believable plot. Interested to see characters develop.
    March 11th, 2012 at 09:22pm
  • shirtless

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    How does this have almost no comments? This is amazing! The detail, the layout, the plot -- everything is absolutely perfect. It's so nice to find a killjoy story that's actually worth reading. You have to update soon because chapter three's cliffhanger has me all tense with anticipation.
    I'm definitely subscribing.
    February 26th, 2012 at 11:07am
  • JamieJo

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    Oh my goodness! I love love love love love this story! Your writing is amazing! All of the detail you add makes it so easy to imagine the places you describe, almost as if I'm looking at a picture. I love a story that has both an interesting plot and a wonderful writing style, and this has both.

    I really hope you update soon! Subscribed of course <3
    February 23rd, 2012 at 05:16pm
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