Close Your Eyes - Comments

Wow, this was amazing. The emotions and the pain just seemed to jump off the page. It felt so real. I can totally rlate to having life seemingly perfect, then something bad happens and messed it all up. And my favorite line in this was, "I’ll be my hero today." I liked that because it's so true sometimes. Sometime we can't have somebody else come and save us, we have to do that for ourselves. Your writing style was amazing, and while it was kinda confusing at first, by the time I got to the end it made sense. It keeps you wondering what happened to the main character, which is good because it keeps you reading. Very good one-shot! =)

This is a very strong piece. I can just tell there is emotion behind this a very strong one, too. It's so strong that I almost cried reading this since it kinda relates to me, and the way you wrote it was just amazing. I love you! Don't ever change anything about you or yor writing cause it's perfect. :D