The Devil's Tongue. - Comments

  • spidey babe parker

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    I forgot to comment you before and tell you how amazing I found this.
    February 6th, 2012 at 09:12am
  • vices

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    ugh this is so wonderful asdklfjahlsdf.
    and my name's Alexandra... hehehoho.
    I know I'll marry John Oh sometime soon. I just know it.
    January 23rd, 2012 at 07:06am
  • becauseiamfree

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    i love you.
    its as simple as that.
    every single i read by you is simple perfection.
    thank you for writing stuff like this and i hope to read many more in the future <3
    January 7th, 2012 at 12:29pm
  • raja sahara

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    Did you make this layout?!
    If you did, then I must say that I am extremely proud.
    Except now you might surpass me as the Layout Queen...

    Anywhoooooo, this story! DAMN. So powerful! And Misery...one of the best songs on the album, I admit. This was wonderful and you know how much I love your writing. Need I say more?
    :)
    January 7th, 2012 at 03:49am
  • State Of Grace

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    I loved this. You did an amazing job at creating your own story from the lyrics of the song and then mixing those lyrica into these stories. My favorite part was when you wrote that he was looking for his own sweet misery because he is (at least in the story). Anyway I hope you win the contest you definitely deserve it!
    December 31st, 2011 at 08:42pm
  • writhing

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    Oh my goodness, why must your writing be so amazing?

    I really, really loved this one-shot. John is just so damn delicious.
    I love that one line in the song where he sings, "Looking for misery, but she found me lying naked on the floor."
    I'm just like DAMN LAY NAKED ON MY FLOOR.

    But anyway, I liked how you incorporated the song and some of the lyrics into the story (at least, I think you did).
    Surely, we can all relate to the way John is feeling. I know I can.
    This was so well written and wonderful. I hope you place well in that contest. :)
    December 31st, 2011 at 11:03am