I anxiously wait for your sequel to come out! I wonder what could be in store for the story. Also, it brings me grief reading Boromir's death. It had to be done. Well, keep it up! Let me know when your sequel is up!
I love your story so far although I do beleive it is a little rushed it is not rushed to the point where you can't understand it which is very good but with how long they are I can understand that. This is a very creative story and i would have never thought to right one like this. Keep up the great writing and I will be waiting excitedly for your next chapter I also can not wait to see how you portray Boromir's death.
I love your story so far although I do beleive it is a little rushed it is not rushed to the point where you can't understand it which is very good but with how long they are I can understand that. This is a very creative story and i would have never thought to right one like this. Keep up the great writing and I will be waiting excitedly for your next chapter I also can not wait to see how you portray Boromir's death.
Yeah, that was my main thought with sequels. My only argument for having it all in one was that they could seem short when their separated, but that's a dodgy excuse at best XDD Thank you very much for the input <3
Ooh, Haldir trying to sneak up into it. I am excited about this. I have a soft spot for Haldir, and it would be interesting if he did take interest in her. Update soon. :)
This was a joy to read! There are so many bad lotr fanfics on mibba that I was kinda losing hope of finding an author who put some thought into it, not just copy the movie script. So I'm really glad that I found your story! Looking forward to read more of it :D
I love this so far! It does seem a bit rushed, as Fleuret has said, but you are following the movies after all. The movies are a bit rushed themselves. Keep up the good work. (:
Thank you ^^. I was thinking while i wrote the last chapter, that I'm rushing things a bit. I'll do my best to slow it down :D I think I spend THAT much time trying to translate to elvish that I lose patience sometimes XDD
I am enjoying this story very much! I have never read a Lord of th Rings fic with a Mothredel ( I probably misspelled that). Very creative. There are moments where the plot line seems rushed, but understandably so. I look forward to the next chapter :)
January 4th, 2012 at 08:55pm
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