Kiss Each Other Clean - Comments

Oh my god, wow. I really loved this. I'm a huge Jensen fan, and I was looking for some stories to waste some time and this was perfect. I couldn't stop reading, you are great with words, and the way you got Dean's character perfectly really stunned me. There should be more.

Wow, this was great. I really just love your writing and I think you did a wonderful job with Dean's characterization. I'm really glad I came across this.

Dang, just...dang. I loved it. The way you portray Dean was perfect and the rhetoric was amazing. Good job!

I think you did really well portraying Dean and making this sound like an actual scene in Supernatural. I totally felt super cheesy at some points smiling like an idiot and you also did really well with the sex scene. There were a few spelling errors here and there but it was really well done. :)

Man, that was really good. I like in the beginning how you gave just the right amount of info on Dean's life and how you wrote about how he actually had feelings for Leah and she just wasn't another random chick. I also like that when Dean was trying to undress her, he couldn't undo her corset and ended up making a know. I thought it was kind of funny because Dean is usually so smooth, haha. But yeah, great job! I thought this whole piece was perfect.

I loved that so much, it was perfect!
Especially considering you dont usually write supernatural fanfiction.
You've got Dean down perfectly.
And the sex scene was so steamy, I loved it!
Thank you so much!

DAMN. That was hot and made me all bothered and oh my *w*
This was really well written and I love the lack of dialogue.

Great job! :D <3