Take Away My Pain - Comments

i'm a little sad that it's over, but i think the ending was just perfect. i really loved this story.

yey! they're gonna start a life together! i'm so excited to find out what happen next!

I have never before read such a well-written story before.I can't wait for the next chapter :)

yes! i am so excited for the next chapter! i can't wait! please update again soon!

This chapter made me so, so happy Kayla. It's been a bit of a bad day, so sitting down at the end of it and reading that was just so special. I felt so warm and bubbly inside because of everything he was saying about wanting to start a family with her and wanting to get married. It's just... I guess it's the fact that she changed him and that he could love her that much. I'm a bit of a hopeless romantic, so I just swoon over that stuff haha. Your writing is incredible. I was so excited when I saw this update in my inbox. Honestly... this has to be one of my favourite stories of all time. Because not only does it have my Johnny, but it's just so raw and emotional and ret helplessly lovely at the same time. I know I say this every time, but it means so much to me that you would write this. I guess I'm having one of those days where I need to thank people for how much they mean to me, haha. But anyway, this story is absolutely incredible and it's making me crush on Johnny/George even more! XD

Love this chapter I am soo happy tht Ashleigh decided to take George back he deserves another chance after Danny knocked his common sense straight.....can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

this was a beautiful chapter, i loved it and cannot wait for the next one!

HOW HAVE I NOT COMMENTED ON THIS? WHY AM I SUCH A BAD PERSON? I'm sorry, Kayla. I came back to re-read the chapter and realised that I hadn't commented haha. But I absolutely loved it once again. The way you manage to keep the same dark, eerie tone clinging to your words is just a wonderful. I feel like I'm caught up in a blackened world and the emotions I feel whilst reading are just so strong and intense that when the chapter ends, it's like something hits me. Hard. You're just such an amazing writer, and I respect you so much for your ability to clasp my heart and make my feelings go up and down with simply words.

Johnny is beautiful, and I'm glad he came home to find her. I love the way Danny reacted to everything, because I think that that's what he needed to realise that he'd allowed his emotional blockage to stop him from doing what he truly wanted and needed. This story is perfect, and I never want it to end! I know that it's the peice that I'll come back to again and again in the moments where I feel numb and I want to be sucked into a realm that I can get lost in. It's beautiful. I can't wait for more. XD

just found this one and loving it
can't wait for more

Awwww George is finally becoming an honest man he is such a softie I love it he really loves Ashleigh especially if he wants to fix everything between them frm the suicide attempt, the cheating, horrible things he said to her at the hospital to the love tht he has fr her nd how stupid he was nd how he wants a second chance I just love this story can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

-gives Danny a standing ovation- this is amazing and i can't wait for you to post the next chapter.

Um... wow. Those last few chapters... there were emotions flying at me from every angle and I struggled to find one to sustain. Your wording is just so fluid and deep and it astounds me that someone so young and with only herself as her writing giude could find the words to create such an intense peice. It's incredible. You seem to know so much about the world, and it shows through your ability to create insight into your characters and allow us to feel through them. It's a really, really amazing thing, Kayla. XD

I'll admit, I visibly flinched when he said that he didn't want her. Because even though you've described in so many words that he does and that he needs her, it was just so sudden and powerful and I was so caught up in the story that I felt the blow. I can only hope that she'll come back to him and that he'll accept that they're right for each other, no matter how wrong they are themselves. If this was real I think I'd be handcuffing myself to him right about now.

Love it to pieces! ^_^

O.O sweet baby Jesus, that was intense! -ironically, i am now listening to My Black Dahlia-

Wow O.O Can't wait for more :)

love this

i have to agree with the person above me, 100 percent. you're writing is just amazing and i really and truly love this story. thank-you so much for posting the link on Tumblr.

Oh my god... that was incredible. Terrifying and emotional, but incredible at the same time. Your writing maintains the same tone throughout every chapter, which can be a very hard thing to do. Somehow it feels as though there's a giant, black cloud covering the story, and covering the imagery I get while I read. And it just intensifies the raw emotions that you're writing with, and draws me in so, so deep until I never want to stop reading. And that's true... I get to the end of each chapter and I'm almost praying that another one would appear, because through this story it feels as though I'm learning about George, the man behind Johnny 3 Tears, in such a realistic way that it's hard to remember that this is a fictional story.

That last chapter was just... wow. I almost felt like crying when you described how horrible he looked and way feeling, and then what he did to himself... I just can't put it into words. And the guilt that she must have felt when she found him... it's just a forceful rush of emotions that keep hitting you, over and over. Your writing is incredible, and it's even more incredible in its ability to make the reader feel that much. You're amazing, Kayla. I'm hoping that he pulls through. XD

holy fuck! this is amazing! seriously, even though it's dark as hell, it's kick-ass writing and i love it!

Loved it!

This is sooo good!