Take Away My Pain - Comments

I teared up a bit there
but i liked it either way

I think this was a very sad one shot, but it was so goood too! He really did mess up, and he knows it. He shouldn't have cheated on her though! I cannot wait to see what happens!

I'll be completely honest... I cried. A lot. I think it may have to do with the fact that we've been talking about him all night, and also because your writing is so incredible that it actually seems real. We talked about how we both felt bad for him and the way he gets down and writes those songs, but in this story you just proved how dedicated you are to the band, because you seemed to know him so well. Your writing was fluid, emotional and just flawless.

Another reason that I teared up was because I'm so, so grateful that you did this for me. You're an amazing friend, and it means a lot. This has to be one of the greatest stories I'm ever going to read, because I can already feel the emotion as if it's crawling off of the page and I'm holding it in my hands.

I wouldn't stand for someone cheating on me, and my man should have known that. I can't wait to see how this story unfolds; I'm so, so excited for it! As always, I know I'll be amazed by your writing! XD

Aw, this is so heartbreaking! I was so close to tears. :( Fuck, George better get his act together if he wants Ash. I can't wait to see what happens.

Aw, that was so sad. George is devastated.
The only good thing is that I get Danny, lol
Wonderful work!

I have never before seen such a cute story layout/plot for a HU story- props. Not to mention that I teared up just a little.