Hearts Bleeding in the Rain - Comments

your fourth chapter is way better. it wasn't short and it was very descrptive

January 22nd, 2012 at 10:44pm

Haha, tanku's!!!!

January 22nd, 2012 at 04:58pm

You have made me happy by updating :)

January 22nd, 2012 at 04:41pm

i like how the ending of chapter 3 leaves you wondering about what happens next. good so far!

January 19th, 2012 at 12:09am

This is great! ahhh can't wait for more like always :) So impatient I am lol

January 9th, 2012 at 04:56am

Ahhh! I want more pwease :)

January 8th, 2012 at 06:23pm

I like this one too! Why are you such a good writer I'm jealous! You gonna write more? Hope so! Its descriptive and I like that :)

January 8th, 2012 at 04:17am

Thanks. :) Like I said, there's a perfect place to stop something. :)

January 5th, 2012 at 03:46am

Like I said before this is really good. Very descriptive. My only advice is to make the chapters longer

January 5th, 2012 at 03:45am