Well, I most certainly didn't expect that ending! With one little word, you managed to twist the story completely, and I love that! XD
I'm supposed to be getting ready for work, but I like to read something short before I do. I checked to see if you had anything posted, and there you have it. =)
I love your writing style. It's so smooth and your dialogue is absolutely perfect. ^_^ Anyway, I must run...
I really like this so far! I like the language that they all use. The ending, was just...crazy. "White." I'm looking forward to reading more form you :)
I'm supposed to be getting ready for work, but I like to read something short before I do. I checked to see if you had anything posted, and there you have it. =)
I love your writing style. It's so smooth and your dialogue is absolutely perfect. ^_^ Anyway, I must run...
xoxo
HJ.