August 30th, 2016 at 05:17am
The story behind this is really good! I love the detail and medieval fantasy feel to it. There are quite a few grammatical/spelling errors but I enjoyed reading nonetheless; all it needs is a good proofread. I'd be happy to do so for you, if you would like. I can send the proofread version over in a direct message and then you could correct me if I am unsure or misunderstood in places. Let me know if you'd like me to help!
I look forward to finding out what Alexi's true destiny is. If you are willing, the revival of this story would certainly be appreciated by me. :-)
Hey, glad you liked it, I haven't had much time to write creatively for a couple of years but was thinking of getting back to it. I haven't even looked at my old stories for ages, but it depends how I feel when I get back to writing. I you are happy to proofread it for me that would be greatly appreciated :). (Also some of the spelling stuff might be localisation).