Only one problem with this chapter: you previously stated that Bandit is a boy, whereas, in this chapter, you said that Bandit is a girl... Just thought I should point that out :)
DUDE! DUDE! DUDE! UPDATE!!! Pweeeeese? *puppy dog eyes* I wanna see what haaappppeens D: I dont want Billie and Mikey to die! *is acting like a really whiny little kid* pleeesee?!?!? ~~xoxoxo Detts~~
Oh my goodness... this is so awesome! Poor Mikey and Billie!!! D: I feel so bad for them but yay! Billie told Mikey, whoo!
I haven't commented on this story in ages :O (sorry, things are hectic at the moment so I don't often get a chance to comment. I will whenever I can though :D). IT'S SO MAGICAL AND AWESOME LIKE SKITTLES AND UNICORNS!!! Please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next! xD xo