I love this story. I love all the details and everything else about it. I wish I could write like you do. If i could I would write everyday. Update soon please, i cant wait for the next chapter. Just so you know I am writing this for comment swap but what I am saying is true. I am so happy comment swap had me read your story or else I probably would never have found it. I know this is a long comment but that is what is required for comment swap.
You're an incredible writer. The style you have is amazing, and the way you write in third person so fluidly makes me envious. I have very little background knowledge on your topic, but I still was completely intrigued by the story. Your descriptions and details made everything very clear to me. Plus, I adore the name Ophelia! Update soon, you've got a great beginning here.(: