thank you :D
January 5th, 2012 at 03:40am
This is really cute c: It isn't too long, and not too short. Only one chapter, which I like when I do contests.
I didn't see any spelling errors, but there was one thing that annoyed me a little. In certain places you switch tenses (like saying "now" instead of "then"). It wasn't that big of a deal, I just felt like pointing that out.
The layout is nice, everything was really easy to read. The thing about the picture, though, was that it didn't exactly fit the box that it was in. If that makes any sense. Sorry I can't explain it any better.
Overall, good job. I can't wait to see where you place with the others.
