Woah! Now that was nice...the best part was the happy ending though! I love happy endings! :D
January 11th, 2014 at 04:04pm
this is really sweet and I like where you went with the picture. this actually reminds me of the movie Cast Away because the woman held on for so long, but knew she had to give up. I like your description. there were numerous grammar mistakes, however. mostly you had a problem with your tenses, you did not use them correctly.
thanks for entering my contest and good job! c: