Blinded in Chains - Comments

Totally loved it....it was a great story..!!!

I can't believe Steve did this.. jerk, but I'm happy Em's dad likes brian and that she'll get to know Brians friends :)
I enjoyed reading this :)

I had a feeling Steve was up to no good
I loved reading this

Steve is jealous
Im glad Brian came to his senses

I'm glad Brian came back :) And Steve is a total creeper. I think he may have something else what he's going to do. I'm glad she'll keep her job :)

All of the dialogue in this story feels kind of emotionless... I like the concept, you just need more emotion :)

loved it its soo awesome!

O.o you're kidding me right? Gosh I would kick Brian's ass for walking away from her like that. This way it seems he doesn't care about her and I hope he'll explain, that this was all a misunderstanding or something like that ;)
Looking forward for the next chapter :)

Brian wtf? forget about revenge and go to your girlfriend

Oh my gosh.. this was evil!
I really do liked the talk between Brian and Em, but (and I'm really sorry for having a but) I think it was a bit confusing with the guards taking over the office. I know you wanted to make sure everything was a bit hectical with Em's point of view, but I think it would have been nice if someone had said that the guards came into the office. I was a bit confused I have to admit, as I thought the guards had shoot her.
But instead of that, that was an awesome chapter and I really like this sorry.
Hope you're not mad, just wanted to point that out :)

Chris fucking deserved that. People like that don't deserve to live -.-
I hope Em is going to live... she is ...right?
There wouldn't be a point in this stoy if she died D:

Finally Chris is dead...i hope Em makes it out of this okay

Aww Great Chapter ^-^
They're a parfect couple xD

Chris just got told....they won't hurt Em.

You're fast in updating, I like that :)
And I really do like this chapter, I think it's one of my favorites. It impresses me that Brian isn't the only one who stood up for her and the ending is so sweet.
Upload soon :)

Hope Brian can save her! And I wonder if Em returns Brians feelings, but she seemed comfortable with him around her. Looking forward for an upload :)

I wonder how Emily is feeling about Brian...they would make a c ute couple

Oh wow...could Chris be anymore blunt
I hope Em can do this

Thank goodness his friends and family are safe..
Poor Em...its a big wake up call to her

brian to the rescue...hopefully they'll get out of there alive and unharmed