Demolition Lovers - Comments

You're amazing. You know that, right? Because you are!

Brilliant! I love your writing style.
Gerard is gonna get her butt in check, isn't he?
I think he really does like her, he just doesn't wanna say anything.
I hope he gets her clean so that they can both realize they like each other. :3

I love this chapter :)

Yay!!! New story that I love!! :D
And she is one emotional drunk! Holy crap. xD
You have a lot of talent as a writer. Keep up the good work, lovely!! :)

Aaahhhhhhgggghhhh. Me gusta mucho. The story's so different. Like, not cliche, if that makes sense. C:

yay! I love dedicated chapters to me :) ANd I love their dynamic xDD It's so interesting and strange for a fan fiction :)

Great job! I totally forgot about this story because you haven't updated in a while! Anyway, I hope to read more form you soon :)

Oh my goodness, you need to update this. It's pretty amazing. <3

Hmm, yeah, I think I like that character of yours. What's her name? Oh, yeah, Ike c;

Hi again ^_^ I see you changed the layout, I think. Anyway, great job! I really love the beginning. Especially the beginning :D

I've actually been getting around to fixing it. I've gone back to read it, and it's strained my eyes, so I understand it must be the same for the readers. I'm gonna be fixing it ASAP. But, the font comes up as a normal size on my computer... I'll make it bigger though.

Hope you like the story!

hey! I'm MJ and I too write fanfictions :)

First word of advice, think you could use a different layout with bigger font? The white is really hard to read against the black with such tiny font.