Lindsey Ballato vs. the World - Comments

I really really love this idea so much. I was very excited to stumble upon it. I love Scott Pilgrim, and I think this is a brilliant idea for an AU (and this is coming from someone who isn't normally big on really AU stuff.)

Complaints:
-I'm not a huge fan of hyper!Frank in fics, but I'll go with it because this is an AU anyway.
-I'm not really a fan of capslock being used frequently in writing.
-Also, you could do without the little asterisk dividers (******) between sections. (Example, in chapter one when it goes from practice to her dreaming, between those sections you have them and they are practically everywhere in chapter 2. They are honestly kinda annoying, and I know I'm not the only Mibbian who feels that way.)

Other observations:
-I love that Patrick Stump is the drummer! And Pete is the guy that just hangs out that isn't in the band.
-Awwww! Frank is so pitiful and cute in the beginning of chapter two when she forgets to get him from school.

I'm really excited about this story! Please update soon?

Okay so, I LOVELOVELOVE Scott Pilgrim and MCR and right before I saw this, I thought 'I wonder if anyone's done a Scott P. AU with MCR.' and what do I stumble upon? THIS! Which is the bestest I've ever read! MORE MORE MORE!!!! Please?

Okay, so... Scott Pilgrim AU! FOR THE WIN, WIN, WIN! I'm totally over excited about this idea now, I can't wait to see how you take this, and whether you stray from the beaten path and change things up in the long run. Can't wait for more.