Moon Warrior - Comments

I liked it a lot! I feel like it needs a little more detial in general. I'm a sucker for detail though :) over all really good!

@ stumble into the sun well i kind of had too but yea i guess you are right thanks and shes the moon warrior bc she was born at exactly midnight and you should have read the discription and the moon warrior is someone who is supposed to protect zharia and she controls water her powers peak at night meaning its at their strongest when the moon is out hence the word moon warrior also in the description (i think) but once i write the next few chaps it should clear up and i will also post sun warrior make sure to read the description

Great idea, but I'd like to see the story worked out a bit more. Such as why she's the moon warrior, and what exactly the moon warrior is. It might be too soon to give it all that, but maybe you should've kept his identity a secret just a bit longer.

Just my opinion.

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