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  • words as weapons

    words as weapons (100)

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    I love,your story its interesting and completely original not to mention very eelll written anyways please update soon or ill be sad
    January 30th, 2013 at 08:02am
  • ocarina.

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    I totally love this story! It's a lot different than the usual thing I find on Mibba but I think that's why it completely engulfs me so easily because Cole is seriously just so great, I love him! :3

    I like that he's not the whole stereotypical flamboyouant type, but he's just very chill and content most of the time (that doesn't involve his brothers xD) and its so adorable the way he's sort of crushing on the man-of-not-many-words Noah. He's just a very likable person, and I totally died at ten you'll be kicked out if you start painting your nails thing.

    I can't decide which brother is my favourite yet, but I like how they're all sort of dicks but in that sibling way where in the end they're all pretty supportive too. So far, I'm a total sucker for twins, though. c:

    And I like how naturally everything progresses, it's completely believable that Noah's not beside him in every class (which I've read stories like that before, actually .___.) and that they're not instantly clicking but very slowly getting into each other's presences, which him coming over and whatnot. That being said, I am so excited for them to talk more! ^^

    I can't wait to read more about Noah because so far he's been quite silent, but he can't be all bad if he helped a stranger out of their locker? xD Excited to find more about that mysterious boy, for sure! I shall be anticipating updates! :3
    August 10th, 2012 at 12:18pm
  • maxx danziger

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    Sounds like he has very strange brothers :3 I'd be irritated by them and do something back if I was him. I'm loving it so far and can't wait for it to finally get moving :D I can tell this will be great. Update?
    January 5th, 2012 at 07:33pm
  • millychuuthecat

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    This story is so cute! x3 It made me go 'aww'.
    It's like.. I can tell how it feels, as you put detail into it. :D
    I love it. Write moar? c:
    Oh and the football and texas thing?
    That is so true.
    AND I'M FROM TEXAS! XD
    January 5th, 2012 at 04:44am
  • atypical

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    I don't know what to say um I'm distracted by the football game iufyshdf
    I laughed at your comment about soccer there being like football to Texans .
    It's pretty accurate, though I like hockey more than football.
    Anyway
    It's really good!
    Me gusta
    Update soon :)
    January 3rd, 2012 at 02:06am
  • maxx danziger

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    I did not realise you has posted a second chapter. Aiden's got a little crush on the new kid <3
    January 2nd, 2012 at 11:38pm
  • maxx danziger

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    Sounds like this is going to be interesting :) I can't wait to see where you go with this.
    January 2nd, 2012 at 11:34pm