His Blue-eyed beauty - Comments

wow i knew u were good at writeing books but if this get finhed it should be published nd im not saying that as a friend im saying it cause i loved this 2 chapters of a book

Really really good! It was very suspenseful. A part that confused me was that there was no way out of the room, and then I was thinking "Then how did she get in there?" but then I figured it out(: I really liked it, it's definitely worth continuing. The only thing I would say is that to make your chapters a bit longer, because I was so disappointed, wanting to read more! Haha but you don't have to because a book with short chapters is just as good. Keep up the great writing skills!

Really good ! With a story like that it's worth continuing !! =]

More soon?

LOVE IT! :) MOREEEE!! :D