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  • Black_Star

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    wow i knew u were good at writeing books but if this get finhed it should be published nd im not saying that as a friend im saying it cause i loved this 2 chapters of a book
    July 26th, 2012 at 05:15am
  • sissycullen

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    Really really good! It was very suspenseful. A part that confused me was that there was no way out of the room, and then I was thinking "Then how did she get in there?" but then I figured it out(: I really liked it, it's definitely worth continuing. The only thing I would say is that to make your chapters a bit longer, because I was so disappointed, wanting to read more! Haha but you don't have to because a book with short chapters is just as good. Keep up the great writing skills!
    July 16th, 2012 at 10:25pm
  • Tickled Pinkly

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    Really good ! With a story like that it's worth continuing !! =]
    May 18th, 2012 at 11:48pm
  • KillJoySynner

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    More soon?
    May 17th, 2012 at 02:21am
  • jesspurdy13

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    LOVE IT! :) MOREEEE!! :D
    January 21st, 2012 at 10:31pm
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