Lost and Insecure - Comments

I absolutely loved this!!! You are amazing writer <3

I really liked your story. I didn't know what to expect when I started reading it but I really enjoyed reading it.

well that's could be different brian looks really love her daughter so much ! I like it

Didn't this used to have a sequel?

I know I said this too much but please bring back the sequel to lost and insecure

Please wright a sequel

I love this story you should wright a sequel maybe you can have Brian's daughter find out about them being in the mob or something please :)

Please update soon

I have to say I am not into band fiction and I never really read it, but as the comment swap goes...

The layout is nice and simple. I hate it when they are overly decorated and screaming neon colors. So triple plus on that. lol

The beginning of the story was really sweet. From what I have read in other comments regarding band fiction it is usually fan girl gets band guy and make love to no end. This is completely different and I was relieved. I have to say I do not like changing point of views in the story, especially if it is stated Brian’s POV or Whoever’s POV. Felt like I was on Quizilla.
Some of the actions you had in the story seemed very robotic. Like this: “…she was working on a math worksheet in class. She finished her sheet before everyone else and the Teacher let her draw. The Teacher got a phone call and she answered it.”

It seems like you are just going through the motions and it does not have any real effect. I also found it odd that Johnny wanted to tan. I don’t know. Anyway, I am glad you did not make her remember the rape and beating. It was a little cliché but nothing overbearing.

Oh gosh! This story was so sweet in the beginning and then...yeah. I didn't like the changing POV's but I got over it. :)

I just finished the ENTIRE story right now, and I have to say, I am seriously in love!
I hope Skye is a teenager in the next story! Teenage lives are always full of good drama haha! I'm excited to more!

Lol my little gnome.....I loved reading this
Can you send me a link?

I love the story can't wait for the next one

Fuck yeah! John's dead!
Can't wait for more!

yay! three cheers for the sequel!
will she ever remember what that bastard did to her? i hope not, noone should have to remember something like that.

Well i think I know whats gonna happen in the sequel. It may be hard but i think he should tell her

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! :'(

UPDATE PLEASE!!!

And I'm super psyched for the sequel...

Aw man I can't believe that happened to Skye!! Poor baby!!!

:'(

I just screamed NOOOOOOOOO in my head. :/

John is a sick bastard pedo.