Hitch Hiker - Comments

Love, love, love this story. It's great, eerie, action-packed, and to-the-point.
Great job.

I liked this. It's very "told", and not shown. Like, usually when you read stories the author paints a huge picture with their words, but I didn't feel that happened here. HOWEVER it suited this story very, very well. It kind of gave it an even eerier feeling, because it helped with Ryder's calm. I've seen the new version with Sean Bean (if you haven't, gurl go watch) and I really felt like the character was spot on. I also like the happy ending. Very good job! :)