Where to begin? I'm here from comment swap and I am totally in love with this story. I like the mystery behind where she doesnt know anything about her father and other vampires and how her mother didn't just leave her somewhere haha. You write very well and there aren't any grammatical errors. This is a very good start to this story and I hope you do have the time and inspiration to continue with this. It seems thought out very well and even though it's only three chapters you really have me hooked. Maybe she will find her Dad? 8)
September 24th, 2012 at 09:10pm