VERY INTERESTING. I'M WONDERING, HOWEVER, WHY JARED'S THE BAD GUY. THIS IS THE SECOND (OK ONLY TWO) STORY I'VE READ WHERE JARED'S THE BAD GUY. LOL // KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
Hi Im new to this story. Normally I don't read Jared story's so much. I prefer Shannon. But this story is wonderful. Im intrigued as to why Jared has "fallen". And what the role of Shannon is in all this.
I'm sorry ahead of time. But I couldn't take this seriously, because I keep thinking of Twilight. Even though it wasn't like Twilight. xD But omg. I love it. :D
Just wanted to say that in chapter 11 you say "mon cher". It's actually "ma cheri" "mon cher" is male and I think that Elizabeth is still female. Anyways, the story is just fuckig amazing. I'm eager to read the rest, so update soon, please.