aww this was a sweet update. So nice to see Brian actually being civil, and Doc Morgan having the hots for Joe :-) Can't wait to read the next update - I hope she smacks Gena into next week :p
It's nice to see that Brian's being somewhat civil. I feel like even if he doesn't trust her, they'll get along soon, especially after the conversation of lyrics.
It sounded like you didn't like the chapter, but I really did! I'm glad Brian showed his civil side and I hope that he won't cause the drama. But I think that's Gena's job. As I said before, I can't wait for the BBQ! It was pretty nice of El to let Morgan and Joe hook up (does you say that? I'm not quiet sure, but I hope you get what I mean, if not :P). And I have to laugh every time Ty and El are talking, but i really do hope that the two of them won't get an item. I'm looking forward for an update :)
high five girl for the updates! Ty is so crazy with his cocky cute comments I love it! but he is so sweet too =] Brian ugh ass! seriously, this story is my drug its horrible bc I am soo addicted!!! What are you doing to me woman! lol
I love you, for the fast updates x3 I really do and I'm amazed 'cause your chapters are so long! So what to say about that chapter. Maybe that I'm so Team Val?? Her speech was really moving (you say that? I'm not quiet sure) and I'm glad that there's only Brian left who need to be convinced. You were right, I absolutly feel poor for Zacky! First the problems with Gena, second that Ellie still pushes him away and third that his friends try to push her away. I bet he feels betrayed by Brian. Oh yeah, and now he's jealous because of Ty, poor Zacky! I'm looking forward for the bbq, should be interesting with Brian, Gena, Joe and Elli. Or maybe little Sam would harm them xD So, hope you upload soon :)
Omg. What was I doing when all these beautiful updates came out!? they're great and you're right chapter 10 is filled with so much awesome xD ok so Gena sure is mad... O.o she needs to get a grip and so does Brian :| and oh poor little ellie, she did no wrong and shes been treated awfully..but oh well more fun drama to read! And ty has to be the cutest in that shopping cart! HM HM hmmm go updates!!! ^_^
awww I love it - awesome update. I just love Ty and I was laughing at the supermarket scene because my friends were telling a story at a party last night about how they took our other drunken friend home in a shopping trolley and he woke up with it in his room lol
I love her relationship with Ty. He's so wonderful, and I love his flirting. I could see the two of them getting together, but of course, this story is about Zacky. I think that Matt or Val should make their opinions known soon (Was Val in this yet?) and I hope that Zacky finally gets ahold of her soon. And Brian needs to just accept them. Well, that's all my thoughts. Please update soon.
No, no, nooooo... I wish I haven't read that chapter... Everything which can go wrong, went wrong! Tyler should just be a friend and I bet Zacky is sitting in front of her door and waitingg for her, when she comes with Ty. And I really do hope, that someone tells Zacky that Gena had hit Ellie! But I'm glad you found a way to get Morgan out of the picture. So now the only thing you have to do is get rid off of Gena and voila, I would be very happy :) Thanks for the nice start in the day :D
Two updates :D *fist pump* I just read one and I really do hope my bf is late, so I can read the next one now as well, because this chapter was amazing! It had everything, a little bit fun with Tyler, the jealousy from Zacky, a nice evening with Johnny and Lacey, a bitch fight and the emotional side of her. I feel so bad for her, really you write this like I wanted to go right into your story and comfort her, after I had beat Gena! So, now I have to read the next one (hopefully) :D
Whoo hoo for the updates girly :) ty yes hot cute and awesome! Morgan damn sexy bc he is a doc hehe! I want both guys!! She should be with both lol. I hate gena..! I want to punch her and Brian ughh!!
Why do I feel like ty sleeping on her sofa may turn bad...not that ellie will let anything happen just like zack and ty seeing each other would spell trouble.
Well I be damned the woman is attracting some very nice candidates.
I know this isn't really a love story but I love it anyway. Ellie is a wonderfully written character. I can totally sympathize with her current trials. Keep it up
Ty DOES sound pretty good looking... HM... I don't know whether to be afraid of him or fall in love with his character just yet. Jake seems pretty chill, too. :D *prays for the chapter Brian stops being a dick* I bet it'll be a beautiful chapter as well. Ahhh double digit chapters! <3 Oh by the way I'm so happy your story is getting a bunch of awesome reviews, you and this story deserve it for working so hard. ^-^