October 14th, 2015 at 05:45am
Okay, now this...
hopefully you read my other comment first because the beginning of this comment won't really make sense otherwise. Now, I know it said it may be a while until I read something else of yours, but clearly I lied. I found this one and was like, oh hey, I can knock this out, it's a shorter story, short and sweet. And while I did, my God did I feel like I took longer with it. Because I guess the thought of it being shorter made me read twice as slow because I wanted it to last but GAAAHHHH. XD This is my problem, though, not yours deary.
Anyway...
I like fucking loved this. Especially the ending, my GOD, I cannot express how perfect that was. Just the way it was done; it was kind of like going back into what had happened in the past but Ana made it happen on her own accord, it just all tied together, and I was just like, UGH. How the hell did you manage to think of such a perfect ending? And she ended up with Alex too which was just the icing on the cake. ;) AWWWWWWWWW...
I loved the beginning of this and how spite-y it was. I kind of got more frustrated with the last few chapters though because everything just sort of fell apart with that, but I guess it was bound to happen. But the spit-y ness is what brought me in, just so you know. I found it funny. XD
I loved Alex's determination in this. So cute; I could tell from the beginning he was doing it because he liked her. And then I like the learning lesson it teaches; forgive and forget. I'm glad Ana finally learned that. Not to mention, with JACK'S help.
MAY I SAY HOW FUCKING PERFECT THAT WAS? WHAT HE SAID TO HER. OMG. It just made that conclusion even more perfect. Now that's the Jack I like to see. Unsuspectingly wise. :)
My God I am now crying, still from when I was with the ending, but now even more so because IT'S OVER. Gahhhh... I fucking hate that feeling. Comes with every story I finish reading and in all honesty is what makes me keep reading. I like, CAN'T GET ENOUGH.
This was fantastic. Clever idea, too; I like how you did it. I will now wallow in the fact that it's over, so excuse me while I go to do so.
You are such an amazing writer! Please don't stop! And by the way, feel free to talk to me, deary. You seem like a kind soul. I saw you accepted my friend request yesterday after I left my EXCRUCIATINGLY long comment but DID NOT comment back. I understand if it was the feeling of feeling guilty for not having updated in a while, God knows I have done the same exact thing, but you can talk to me. I understand that, and will not go off on you. I will go off on you though if you continue to ignore my comments. I put my time and effort into these, doll. C'mon now. Or maybe you're mad because I have not yet commented on your other I've read, hmmm....
Idk. Or maybe you're just busy. I tend to overanalyze.
But I hope you're well. Still. And if you don't feel like talking to me on here you could go to my profile, see my other handles, and send me a message on Tumblr, Twitter, etc etc.
On a final note, sorry for any typos. I again do not have the patience to go back and find them. Granted, this comment is definitely not as long as the other one, but still, it's taken me a good ten minutes to type out.
BONSOIR! (You probably think I'm nuts, and I totally don't fucking blame you. I blame my sudden bluntness on the fact that I am now a Hustler. I blame ATL and their terrible-example setting. XD)
- Jenna
Just like rereading all of your stories tonight don't mind me. XD
Aww... still love this one so much. Another fav. <3