Because The World Will Never Take My Heart - Comments

Hmm, this story seems pretty good. You're really good at describing places and such. I think I just might subscribe and keep reading :) Great work and I cannot wait for the next update. :)

I was reading this on livejournal when I was randomly scrolling through mibba and found it, WITH MORE CHAPTERS.
Consider me pumped.

<3

i actually really like this, i love the setting of the coffee shop and the playful banter especially in the beginning. you have done a really nice job in describing things just enough and describing how they interact with each other they are cute together. so overall nice job :)

found this on comment swap. I was waiting soooo long for an MCR story to finally come up in story swap and it finally did. I'm not a huge fan of frerard stories but I like this so far. I only read the first chapter so far but I look forward to seeing what happens next. By the way im sorry if you got 3 other comments fro me, lately my comments have been sending twice and I don't know why.

found this on comment swap. I was waiting soooo long for an MCR story to finally come up in story swap and it finally did. I'm not a huge fan of frerard stories but I like this so far. I only read the first chapter so far but I look forward to seeing what happens next. By the way im sorry if you got 3 other comments fro me, lately my comments have been sending twice and I don't know why.

found this on comment swap. I was waiting soooo long for an

found this on comment swap. I was waiting soooo long for an

found this on comment swap. I was waiting soooo long for an

found this on comment swap. I was waiting soooo long for an

I wasn't a big fan of Frerard before I read this story, that's for sure.
Though I wasn't much for reading Slash either, so yeah.

Anyhow, my point here is, I love this story.
Definitely subscribing and recommending

I love how you've got the two working together and I really can't wait to read more.
The notes that Gee's leaving for Frankie are beyond cute, that's for sure.

I'm not one to read Slash but this story is amazing. Like, seriously.
I can't wait to read more.
Definitely subscribing

It's so cute!! Can you update soon? I need it.

I bet you Frankie likes the Cure now xDDD Atleast that song anyway lol

ssfjkleroghldksne,rmbgilhj;r/m,n Gerard's so fucking cute! I wish he would stop working with Lindsay and be with Frankie instead... Frank should go visit, or call, or /something/. <33333 Gah! They are so sweet to eachother. I hope they get married and have tons of little frerard babies. <3333333333333333

Aw those notes are so cute! Can't wait for the next update :)

What?!!! Frank, you no like the Cure?????????!!!!!!!

That chapter was so cute, it's definately my favourite so far. I think Gerard is fucking adorable, sending notes to Frank all the time. It shows he cares.

I love your story, keep updating <3

I guess you could say at first I hated him for being so damn weird about not going to see Gerard. But whatever he is going through I hope we know what its going on.
Gerard is such a hopeless romantic and the way he is sending Frank those notes are so freaking cute and amazing. I wish someone would do that for me. Lol.
I can't wait till' the next update. I love this story.
I feel like I didn't even make sense in this comment.
I'm such a weirdo.
- Jenn.

I really don't care for slash either, but I absolutely adore the way you are working these two together. I will definitely being subscribing to this story.

I really enjoy how there are two of you writing the point of views. It is really refreshing because you both have a bit of different writing style. So it brings a new element to the story because it is legitimately two different people, which is sometimes hard to master when its one person writing both points of view.

Overall you both are doing an amazing job.

I love your attention to detail. I love the notes with lyrics. Cutest thing ever!! I’m such a nerd for romance. I love this though. Please continue to write! I usually don’t like slash really but this is too sweet! I’m hooked! I can’t wait to read more and I’ll be checking out your other stories as well!

I don't think I blamed Gerard for anything. I was just hoping they would at last be together again. But this is probably best for the story. Trying to remind me myself of the saying. Author knows best. Just don't know if I'll succeed. Good chapter.