:D Phil and Dan yay!!! it's sooo cute keep writing you're super duper good!!! I WANNA STEAL YOUR BRAIN AND THEN WRITE ABOUT LLAMAS WITH YOUT AWESOME ABILITY!!!
Well hey there , wait have we met before , yes I think we have we met when I was reading a book once, the book was called "HOW THE HECK DID YOU COME UP WITH THAT AMAZING STORY" yeah I know a long title right it was written by some guy called "I WOULD GIVE MY LEFT LEG TO BE ABLE TO WRITE LIKE THAT" ha wait the left is the dodgey one ok the right one the good one serious ok just take both xx ;) sorry about that I had to get it out of my system any way back to being normal (come on Am you can do it) ok well that was truely remarkable honest a most inspiring eye opening and completely WoW chapter I must admit I LOVED IT x ok so no ideas to help you yet (even if you want my ideas I certainly wouldn't) xx see ya pal xx A xx
I LOVE PHIL AND DAN XD And I agree with you haha Phil seems like the nice innocent one and Dans the dirtier guy who says whatever he thinks basically lol I was looking for a phil and dan story over Christmas but I couldn't find one So today when I saw this I got really excited! I can't wait to see where you go with this I'm so perverted and think they'd make an amazing couple in real life too lol Pervertedness!
A: YOU ARE NOT GOING TO FAIL YOUR GCSE'S B: I love Chapter 1 it's brilliant soft gentle not angst fill or rushed it's slow (in a good way) and steady *wins the race* sorry anyway it's a brilliant beginning to what will no doubt be a brilliant story by a most brilliant writer who coincidentally is one of the most brilliant people so just to be clear I need a new word for Brilliant and that this story and you are well SUPERB xx A xx