My Wonderful Insanity - Comments

thanx man, love you :D <3

Wow, that's really good :) I love how much meaning you can put into what you say, therefore allowing the reader to understand and feel as the character feels, and understand it. If in one of your next chapters you could describe a bit more how Diskay and Mickel look, that'd be awesome, and keep writing! You've got great talent :)